Sunday, February 11, 2024

F&SF April 1956: Robert Bloch, Tom Godwin and Henry Gregor Felsen

In our last episode we read a sex-positive, racism-negative story by Ward Moore that debuted in the April 1956 issue of F&SF.  (I called Moore's story a "lemon" and a "clunker," but editor Anthony Boucher said it was "one of the stories I have been most proud to publish."  Looks like opinions differ.)  While I have the internet archive scan of this issue of F&SF open on my computer, let's check out the stories it contains by Robert "Psycho" Bloch, Tom "Cold Equations" Godwin, and some guy I never heard of, Henry Gregor Felsen.

"I Kiss Your Shadow" by Robert Bloch (1956)  

Here we have a better than average Bloch story, one which doesn't include any of Bloch's stupid puns, one about how a domineering woman can change you, can make you do things you don't want to do, can drive you crazy, can drive you to murder!  "I Kiss Your Shadow" is a supernatural horror story that is structured as a detective story so that we learn what is really going on out of chronological order as the clues are uncovered and the lies exposed, but I'll just give you the plot outline in the order stuff happened, not the order the narrator and readers learn about what happened.

The narrator is a reporter, and his pal Joe Elliot works the rewrite desk at the same paper.  The narrator has an attractive sister, Donna, whom he admits is a ruthless and manipulative go-getter who always figures out a way to get what she wants out of people.  She wants a husband and kids, and falls in love with Joe and transforms him from a guy who is a slob who loves booze and fears marriage into a snappy dresser who deposits all his dough in the bank instead of the local watering hole and is eager to tie the knot and become a suburban dad! 

Or so it appears to the narrator!  In fact, Joe is always trying to break up with Donna, but she uses her hot body to get her way with him time and time again!  Joe cannot resist that body!  So Joe takes the terrible step of murdering Donna!  He makes it look like an accident, fooling the cops and the narrator!  (Some reporter, eh?)

A few weeks after Donna's sudden "accidental" demise, Joe tells the narrator he has started seeing a sort of ghost (he calls it a "shadow") of Donna at night.  Besides calling it a shadow he calls it a "succubus," because it demands kisses--and more!  Joe reports that every night Donna's ectoplasmic (or whatever) form has more substance, is getting stronger.  The narrator of course doesn't believe in ghosts and advises Joe to see a shrink; Joe takes this advice and gives the narrator the idea that he is getting better, just as the narrator is leaving the country for eight months on an assignment.  When the narrator gets back, the psychiatrist Joe has been seeing is dead, apparently having jumped out the window, a suicide.  But Joe, once again a sloppy boozehound, tells the narrator Donna is responsible, that she is now stronger than a man and pushed the therapist out the window because the meddling medical man was getting between Donna and her man!  The narrator still doesn't believe in ghosts, and when he finally figures out Joe murdered Donna, he supposes Joe killed the shrink because the doctor's probing of Joe's psychology was leading him to suspect Donna's death was no accident.  The climax of the story is when Joe dies of a mysterious stroke or heart attack or something while clawing at Donna's grave.  As we expect of a reporter, the narrator keeps his juiciest bit of information a secret, not telling the cops that Joe murdered Donna.  The shock ending comes almost a year later, when the authorities finally start to suspect Donna was murdered and open up her grave--to find not only Donna's corpse, but the corpse of a new born baby!  Donna wanted Joe to make her with child, and she got what she wanted, months after she died!

Thumbs up for "I Kiss Your Shadow," which exploits all of men's fears about women, sex, parenthood and having to take responsibility and throws in some twisted talk-to-a-guy-about-boning-his-sister, necrophilia and dead baby material.  The story would be reprinted numerous times in Bloch collections as well as anthologies like Roger Elwood and Vic Ghidalia's Horror Hunters.


"Operation Opera" by Tom Godwin (1956)

I was pretty hard on Godwin's novel Space Prison when I read it back in 2015, and in 2019 I called his long short story "Mother of Invention" "marginal."  Since then I have judged Godwin's "You Created Us" "acceptable filler" and "Before Willows Ever Walked" "competent but unremarkable."  So I am not exactly in the running for president of the Tom Godwin Appreciation Society.  But let's check this story out, even though Anthony Boucher warns us it is a "light fun-and-games satire" and it looks like it was only ever reprinted in the French edition of F&SF, and our escargot-slurping buddies didn't even put poor Tom's name on their cover!

"Operation Opera" is another sex-positive story (is this the special F&SF sex issue?), one that lampoons high-class prudery and hypocrisy.  It is also full of incidental jokes, and satirizes what we might call ethnocentrism or nationalistic chauvinism.

Drake is the the one-man crew of a ship sent on a diplomatic and investigatory mission to planet Geffon.  His is the second one-man mission to Geffon--the preliminary reports of his predecessor suggested the Geffonese were a very friendly and highly intelligent people whose culture revolved around the fine arts, but then he went insane; Drake is to find out what drove that guy batty.

As expected, the Geffonese are very welcoming to Drake, and spend day after day taking him to art galleries and to the opera and so forth.  After a week of this he has found no clues as to what drove the other scout insane, so HQ instructs him to video a tour of the city; maybe analysis of the film Earthside will provide some insight.  When the natives realize he has filmed some female Geffonese while they were posing nude, working as models for painters, Drake is sentenced to death for creating pornography--paintings of naked women are high art, but photos are vulgar and disgusting!  The Geffonese also explain that his predecessor was similarly convicted of a capital offence for hosting a tea party for the natives, because the tea had an intoxicating effect on the Geffonese and led drinkers to talk frankly about sex, breaking a severe cultural taboo.  Like that earlier scout, Drake is to be decapitated in the climactic scene of an opera (didn't the Romans do this sort of thing, integrate executions into theatrical performances?), and like his predecessor Drake manages to fight his way back to his ship and off the planet, and Drake is even sane enough to report what happened back to HQ.   

The final scenes of "Operation Opera" draw a parallel between Earth people and Geffonese.  The imperialistic and paternalistic Earth authorities lament that because the Geffonese are insane and do not know right from wrong they will not be able to shepherd them to a higher level of civilization.  Similarly, the snobbish and prudish leaders of Geffon sadly observe that both Earthers they have met have proved too immoral and mentally deranged to willingly submit to Geffonese tutelage and join their more sophisticated civilization.

This story is a little slight, but I think it actually works; the jokes are not laugh out loud funny and the points Godwin makes are banal, but neither the jokes nor the arguments are actually bad, and the story moves along pleasantly at a suitably brisk pace.  I'll say this story inches out of "acceptable" territory and just up into "good" territory.  

"The Spaceman Cometh" by Henry Gregor Felsen (1955)

Felsen, wikipedia is telling me, served in the Marine Corps during the Pacific War and wrote many books for kids and teens.  Whoever wrote this wikipedia page doesn't seem to have been a fan of Felsen's work, reporting that "He wrote about 60 books, many of them moralistically exploring the evils of drugs, sexism and racism."  

"The Spaceman Cometh" first appeared in a 1955 issue of Collier's, and Boucher tells us that Judith Merril, who it seems was always scouring mainstream publications for examples of writing that might be considered SF, pointed the story out to him.  "The Spaceman Cometh" would be reprinted in the Groff Conklin anthology 17 X Infinity in 1963 and a Scholastic anthology in 1979, Starstreak edited by Betty M. Owen, who has five SF anthologies from Scholastic listed at isfdb (the other four all seem to collect weird/horror stories.)

"The Spaceman Cometh" is a sort of joke story that uses aliens as foils to point out to us for the billionth time that Earth people are violent and dangerous.  This is the kind of thing Merril likes, banal left-wing whinging.  Thumbs down!

The narrator of "The Spaceman Cometh" is a space alien sent to Earth some ten or whatever years ago to scout us out in preparation for wiping us out.  In disguise as a human, he and an Earth woman fell in love, so he abandoned his mission and they married and settled down in Iowa to start a family.  A decade later she still doesn't know he is an alien.

As the story begins the narrator, a writer who is trying to draft a speech he has been asked to give, spots a space craft--one of his people has caught up with him.  He meets his fellow E.T. and strives to convince him that Earth people are harmless so there is no need to blow up the Earth.  The central joke of the story is that Iowa is full of hunters who shoot birds, teenagers who drive recklessly, and children who play war, and the second alien scout sees all these evidences of the violent nature of the human race within an hour of landing.  The same sort of jokes occur when the alien (also in disguise, of course) visits the narrator's house, where the narrator turns on the TV--all the TV shows are violent--and even has to spank his kids to get them to obey.

The twist ending is that the fearsomeness of Earth people, instead of scaring the second alien into calling for Earth's destruction, scares him into keeping Earth a secret from alien HQ.  The second little twist is that the narrator decides to make the topic of his speech the impossibility of space travel, I guess to help keep the violent people of Earth and his own people from ever meeting.

Besides being tired and obvious when it comes to both its ideology and its jokes, "The Spaceman Cometh" is not internally consistent.  At the start of the story we are told the narrator's people are violent genocidal imperialists who blow up all civilizations they encounter, then in the middle we are told they won't blow up Earth if Earth people are harmless, and finally we learn Earth will be spared because Earth people are so violent.  Similarly, there are jokes about how the narrator fails to recognize the new alien, whom he knew back home, implying that the aliens have distinctive individual  appearances, and then jokes about how all the aliens look exactly the same and it is odd to them that humans all look different.

Boucher, Merril and Felsen did the readers of F&SF a disservice with this one, and I am rejecting the defense that it is just a kids' story, because F&SF is supposed to be oh so sophisticated, as well as the defense that humor doesn't have to be internally consistent, it can be absurd, because I don't like absurdist humor--I like humor that reflects real human psychology.


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Putting aside the lame children's' story, today's exploration of an issue of F&SF has been a good experience; the Robert Bloch story is an above average example of his huge body of work, and the Tom Godwin story is the best Tom Godwin story I have read during the period of this blog's existence.  It feels good to go away from an interaction with another person feeling better about that person.

More short stories in the next episode of MPorcius Fiction Log.

Merril-approved 1956(?) stories by Ward Moore, Alan E. Nourse and Chad Oliver

If you were going to some place where they eat snails to throw soup on the Giaconda, or some place where they eat sheep's organs cooked in a sheep's stomach to hunt for Nessie, or some place where they eat raw fish in order to buy used panties, you might bring a Fodor's or Frommer's guide with you.  Well, we're going to 1956 and we're bringing with us Judith Merril's SF: The Year's Greatest Science-Fiction and Fantasy: Second Annual Volume as our guide.  This installment of Merril's famous anthology series includes a long list of 1956 speculative fiction stories which Merril thought worth recommending but which she didn't include in the book.  We've been doing this for a while, working our way through Merril's alphabetical list, reading selected stories, and today we will tackle an "M," an "N" and an "O."  If you are curious about earlier stops on this tour, check out the links at the bottom of this post, mon cheri.

(Nota bene: Merril recommends Walter M. Miller, Jr.'s "And the Light is Risen," but I am skipping it because it would later be incorporated into A Canticle For Leibowitz, which I read ages ago, as a recent Rutgers grad working for minimum wage in a New Jersey bookstore, and may reread one of these days.)

"No Man Pursueth" by Ward Moore (1956)

I almost bought a 1972 Avon edition of Ward Moore's Bring the Jubilee because I liked the Jeff Jones cover, but alternate history isn't my thing, and even the endorsement of Ray Bradbury was not enough to entice me into committing to reading it.  Last year I read Moore's 1960 story "The Fellow Who Married the Maxill Girl" and I didn't like it; I called it "sappy" and judged the points it was trying to make "banal."  However, I did like the 1961 Moore story I read in 2015, "It Becomes Necessary."  Maybe today's Moore story, "No Man Pursueth," will be a tiebreaker.

Things got off on the wrong foot when, on page 3 of this 30 page story, Moore indulged in unfunny self-referential "meta" humor aimed at the SF community, with thinly veiled references to Sam Moskowitz and Forrest J. Ackerman and direct references to Galaxy editor H. L. Gold and F&SF editor Anthony Boucher.  I find this kind of thing tiresome.

Our lead is a famous stage actress, age 41, and she is having breakfast in a New York diner, reading the paper, when a balding guy introduces himself to her as the number three science-fiction fan in America, even slinging some SF lingo at her ("egoboo," for example.)  After Moore is done with his in-jokes, the SF fan shares with the actress his theory about the recent spate of disturbing and inexplicable events that are dominating news coverage.  All over the world, airplanes are disappearing and large numbers of ordinary people are reporting incredible experiences, the sensation of having been transported to, and then returned from, alternate worlds where people where unusual clothes.  Number Three claims holes in the time-space continuum are responsible.  Later, the actress finds herself in a church and hears another explanation for the phenomena, that they are the result of the accumulated weight of human evil.

Bad news comes from La La Land via the telephone--the actress's second husband reports that her daughter, age 20, from her first marriage, tried to commit suicide (sleeping pills) and is in the hospital.  Scared to fly, the actress and her black maid (whom Moore gives bad grammar and an accent) hop in the car and strike out west from New York City for the left coast.  In Zanesville, Ohio (the maid says "Uhia") they stop to get out to eat and the actress is transported to the past or an alternate universe or something, to find herself an actress performing at a Nazi extermination camp!  

After hearing a black-clad soldier's racist monologue (he talks up the scientific methods employed by the Nazis, perhaps a dig from Moore at the sort of SF fans who are science-obsessed and read Astounding, in contrast to the more literary-minded readers of F&SF) she is transported back to our world, to backwoods Kentucky, where she gets some help from some poor Christians who don't have electricity and don't read the papers ("Sin enough in the world, without reading about it.")  The maid catches up to her and they are continuing their journey west when they and their car are transported to a city with cobblestoned streets (apparently Vienna, centuries ago) where they witness some guys shoot a cat with an arrow.

In some ways "No Man Pursueth" is like a mainstream story about the guilt of parents who focus on their careers instead of spending time with their kids, thus damaging the kids' psychology.  There's even a "magical Negro" who dispenses wisdom about parenting in "blaccent."  In Vienna, the maid cannot understand the speech of the cat killers, but the actress can comprehend both the Viennese and the Nazi; the actress figures this is because the black maid is good and the actress is herself evil, somehow on the same wavelength as the Jew-killers and feline-killers.  It is also the maid who figures out how to get out of the cat-killing world and back to modern America (not by using logic or science, however, but just by following a hunch, as if Moore is following the tradition that while white men try to master the world through data collection and rational calculation, women and blacks just follow intuition or benefit from being close to nature.)  

As these adventures proceed we are privy to the actress's thoughts.  For one thing, she seems to identify with the fictional characters she has played more than with real people.  More importantly, we learn that her first husband cheated on her with her sister, and that hubby #1 urged her to abort their daughter because being pregnant might ruin her figure; the actress carried the pregnancy to term because the risks of the abortion procedure (septicemia) scared her, not because she loved her unborn child.

The two women have almost reached California when the actress is again transported to another world, this a surreal one, a sort of abstract representation of a court of law and/or a theatre stage where she hears voices reciting, among other things, quotes from and about Sacco and Vanzetti.  (When I was a kid in the '70s and '80s people talked about Sacco and Vanzetti all the time, but I feel like I don't hear so much about them any more.)  The actress suddenly realizes that she has been a bad person because she has withheld love from others:
And what was evil?  Cruelty, self-righteousness, stupidity, insensitivity, yes--but in the end it was essentially lack of love.

Her sins include withholding sex from her first husband--she is not only to blame for her daughter's suicide attempt because she was a distant and cold mother focused on her own career, but is also to blame for her husband's infidelity because of her stinginess in sharing her body.  Significantly, we learn that the maid, the person in the story who represents or exemplifies goodness and wisdom, is very sexually active.  (As so often in white-penned fiction, black people in Moore's story are characterized as overflowing with sexuality.)

The phenomena of people travelling to other times and/or worlds, the actress now realizes, were the universe educating people in how to be good, and she somehow senses that these trips would soon end--enough people who were evil, like her, have now been educated, and the balance between good and evil has been restored.

(I think Moore leaves a huge loose end hanging regarding the disappearing airplanes--the actress feels the planes will stop disappearing, but I don't think Moore addresses whether the lost people and machines will ever come back.  Why did he even include the whole concept of vanishing airplanes?  I guess as a way to force the actress and the maid to drive cross country, but he could have just said the actress was afraid of flying, you know, like Isaac Asimov.)

As an historical document, "No Man Pursueth" is sort of interesting, it being a specimen of the pro-sex SF we generally associate with Theodore Sturgeon and Robert Heinlein, and of anti-racism SF that, even though it is all about how awesome black people are, itself feels sort of racist.  The story's apparent low opinion of abortion, nowadays a centerpiece of elite morality, also marks it as being from another era, and we also have the matter of a male writer depicting a female character and passing judgement on her sex life--perhaps a no-no in 2024.  

As a work of entertainment or literature, however, "No Man Pursueth" is lame.  In his intro to the story in F&SF, Anthony Boucher says "No Man Pursueth" is "one of the stories I have been most proud to publish."  I guess Boucher was excited to print a SF story that, instead of trying to teach you science or entertain you with an adventure, tried to treat philosophically real-life relationship issues like marriage, parenting, and race relations.  Unfortunately for all of us, Moore doesn't deal with these issues in a compelling way, and so he's getting a thumbs down from me.  The universe giving people lessons by sending them into the past to witness atrocities is just lazy and childish deus ex machina goop, and Moore isn't even content to let the visions or whatever speak for themselves--after presenting his symbolism and offering his clues, he just tells you exactly what they mean, so his story has no subtlety or nuance or ambiguity, and demands no thought from the reader.  Besides lacking intellectual challenge, "No Man Pursueth" also lacks any real fun or excitement, feels long because of all the extraneous material (like the SF in-jokes in the opening scene) and features a writing style that is merely adequate.  Anthony Boucher, you sold us a lemon.

Boucher included this clunker in the "Best of" F&SF anthology covering this period (I read the Avram Davidson, Theodore Sturgeon and Poul Anderson stories from the volume back in early 2022) and in 1988 our Italian friends shared its pro-sex message with their countrymen (is this really a message they need over there?) in an anthology with a characteristically impressive cover illo by Dutch-born Karel Thole.
      

"Second Sight" by Alan E. Nourse (1956)

I've read two stories by Nourse so far, a lame cat story called "Nize Kitty" and "Family Resemblance," which I condemned as "a ten-page fat joke."  It's been over five years since I read those stories and tempers have cooled, so let's give Nourse a third look, why don't we?  (And let's hope he fares better than Ward Moore has today, and that I can deal with this story in less than 1,500 words.  MPorcius Fiction Log is at risk of blog bloat!)

"Second Sight" is pretty well-written and makes an effort to develop real characters and inspire emotion in the reader, but the actual plot and twist ending are sort of slight.  

The story comes to us in the form of an excerpt from a journal that we are told has only recently been written down but which the journal writer has kept in her mind for years.  The diarist is a young woman who can read minds, and through dialogue and exposition and so forth we learn that she is the world's only psyker, that as a little girl she so scared her parents they willingly surrendered her to government scientists.  At the time covered by the journal excerpt she is in her early twenties and the text largely focuses on how one researcher may be in love with her and is sheltering her from experiments other researchers may want to inflict upon her.  In the end she agrees to do work that consists of using her mind-invading powers to trigger the growth of psychic powers in others ("latents") who have psychic potential but can't seem to blossom on their own.  The surprise reveal at the end is that the psyker is blind and deaf, that her entire relationship with the world is through the medium of her psychic senses.

Acceptable filler.  "Second Sight" would be reprinted in the Nourse collection The Counterfeit Man and in one of those themed anthologies credited to pteromerhanophobic Isaac Asimov and two other guys, in this case Martin Greenberg and Charles Waugh, this one on the theme of mutants.  (I don't know that the woman in the story is really a mutant, though, as her genes, we are told, are normal and if she has kids they are no more likely to have psychic powers than any other person's offspring.  Of course, biochemist Asimov probably knows more about who is and who isn't a mutant than I do.)

The cover of Asimov's Mutants illustrates one of Edmond Hamilton's
more "serious" and critically acclaimed stories, "He That Hath Wings,"
which we read back in 2017

"Let Me Live in a House" by Chad Oliver (1954)

Merril recommends two Oliver stories in the back of SF: The Year's Greatest Science-Fiction and Fantasy: Second Annual Volume; we read 1956's "North Wind" ten years ago, back in my Iowa days, and I said it was "acceptable."  But "Let Me Live in a House" is new to us.  According to isfdb this story debuted in 1954 in Universe Science Fiction, and then in 1955 appeared in a Groff Conklin anthology, Science Fiction Terror Tales.  I guess Merril treated it as a '56 story because it was reprinted in a 1956 issue of the British magazine (then edited by E. C. Tubb!) Authentic Science Fiction.  Despite this bending of the parameters, we're going to roll with it, and read "Let Me Live in a House" in Authentic, to make sure we read the precise version Merril was recommending.  (The illustration in Universe--by the great Virgil Finlay--is better, though.)        

I will always think of Oliver as the guy who tells us modern life sucks and we should live like stone-age Plains Indians, and "Let Me Live in a House" does not alter my attitude.  

"Let Me Live in a House" starts with a sort of sarcastic description of two houses ("cottages,") a sort of caricature of stereotypical suburban homes, each with a white picket fence and a refrigerator ("frigidaire") and a knick-knack-laden mantel and all that, reminding us of all those pop songs that goof on suburbanites, like "Little Boxes" and "Pleasant Valley Sunday" and "Shangri-La."*  Again things were off on the wrong foot--I don't read SF to endure the sort of banal and snobbish criticism I can find (and have) in a multitude of other venues.  Of course, part of Judith Merril's project was to emphasize commonalities between SF and the mainstream, so what I see as a bug she very likely saw as a feature.

*I'll note here that the great Dave Davies has asserted that "Shangri-La" is not in fact "a go at the little, common man."

Anyway, I learned on page two that Oliver's title from the story is from a poem I'd never heard of by Sam Walter Foss, apparently a poem about how you should live among humanity instead of living apart or above the community, even if you are some kind of brainiac; Foss describes the geniuses who live like hermits as "souls like stars" and "pioneer souls who blaze a path," and asserts that he is not one of  them, but wants to live in communion with other men.  One of the main themes of Oliver's "Let Me Live in a House" is that (most if not all) human beings are not suited to life in space away from the rest of humanity, and that those who go into space will suffer horribly, probably to no profit or purpose other than to appease their lust for glory--glory they will not receive!  (Like Kris Neville, Chad Oliver prefigures the themes we see in the work of Barry Malzberg.)  

Four people, three of them boring stereotypes--the dutiful housewife, the woman who is addicted to watching TV, and the middle-aged man still obsessed with his youthful football career--live in a tiny colony or outpost under a dome on barren Ganymede; the colony is built to simulate suburban life, complete with artificial sounds of wind and neighborhood children.  The four people are there to keep an eye on the outpost for a year-long tour of duty; the two fake suburban houses are meant to keep them from being driven insane by the pressures of living in space, and the three I have described have been programmed to be drones, conditioned to act more or less robotically at the outpost--they almost believe they really are in a suburban American neighborhood.  Our main character, Gordon, is the man whose mind is not as blinkered and hindered, the man charged with dealing with unexpected problems.

The plot of "Let Me Live in a House" is about Gordon's reaction to just such an unexpected problem--the arrival of an alien!  After some scenes meant to build tension that presage the arrival of the alien, we get many pages of conversation between Gordon and the extrasolar being, who as aliens so often are in stories, is disguised as a human and has telepathy.  Oliver uses these conversations to give us the backstory of the colony I have already summarized above, and to describe the aliens, who are a contrast to modern European humanity, and illustrate the idea that going into space is a waste of resources, as humans are not psychologically prepared for the challenges presented by space and conquering space will not solve human problems like war, only expand their scope, and the common people of democratic polities will realize this and turn against the space program.

The alien explains that his people are nomads, like "the ancient Plains Indians in the area you think of as North America;" they don't produce anything the way settled people do, so to live they prey upon "sedentary" civilizations, their mental powers giving them the power to trick and overwhelm natives whenever necessary.  The human race is next on the menu.  The first time Gordon tries to attack the alien, Oliver spends half a page describing the pain the alien inflicts on the guy via his telepathy.  But in the end Gordon succeeds in defeating the alien.  But his victory is a tragic one.  For one thing, he is permanently mentally scarred.  For another, none will know of his heroism: Gordon covets the dream that man will conquer space, and he knows that if the common people learn that space is inhabited by hostile aliens that the space program will be shut down.  So he keeps the alien attack a secret. 

I'm giving "Let Me Live in a House" a thumbs down.  Obviously I find its satire of the suburbs annoying, I disagree that the Plains Indians are somehow better than civilized cultures, and I think the human race should conquer the stars and is capable of doing so.  But I have reasons to condemn the story beyond my ideological differences with Oliver.  Most importantly, "Let Me Live in a House" is weighed down with too many long and tedious expository passages.  I also found that Gordon's triumph isn't particularly well explained, isn't all that convincing--he can't resist the psychic attack, and then he can?  Maybe I am just prejudiced because I think Gordon's success works at cross purposes with what I think are Oliver's sincere ideological commitments.


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Not a stellar batch of stories this time; Merril presumably liked the Moore and the Oliver because they were consonant with her own leftist beliefs.     

Thanks for reading this long blog post consisting of my dumb jokes and semi-coherent musings on 1956 SF stories.  For more of the same, check out the links below to previous posts in our Merril-approved-1956-stories series:

Friday, February 9, 2024

The Screaming Mimi by Fredric Brown

Anything you want.  Didn't God have something there: anything you want if you want it badly enough to concentrate on getting it.  Any little thing like a million dollars or any big thing like spending a night with--what was her name?--Yolonda Lang.  
Long time readers of MPorcius Fiction Log may recall that I am a big fan of the often-arty, often-exploitative, Italian crime movies known to English speakers as "giallos" or gialli, and of the Giallo Ciao! Ciao! podcast on which guys talk--for hours and hours!--about these and related films.  For their recent 100th episode the Giallo Ciao! Ciao! crew revisited one of the most famous and influential gialli, 1970's The Bird with the Crystal Plumage*, directed and scripted by Dario Argento, and noted that the film was loosely based on Fredric Brown's 1949 novel The Screaming Mimi.  Even though founding member of the podcast Matt "Creep Creepersin" Wall didn't have nice things to say about Brown's novel, I decided to read it--Brown has a very high reputation and I've read plenty of Brown's work here at MPorcius Fiction Log and enjoyed a lot of it.  I own a 2016 Bruin Books omnibus edition of The Screaming Mimi and Brown's 1951 novel The Far Cry (which I read in 2020) and will be reading that edition.  (The covers of the other editions are much more attractive, however--feast your eyes below!**)

*The Bird with the Crystal Plumage is a great movie if you judge films by how beautiful are the photography and set design, how exciting the action scenes, and how fascinating the actors' faces.  If you go to the cinema looking for a believable story and characters you care about, well, maybe not.

**Worse, this Bruin Books printing is rife with printing errors that I suspect are artifacts of the electronic scanning of an old text: missing words, missing punctuation, periods in the middle of sentences, words with most letters in one font and one letter in another font, etc.; at times I consulted earlier editions of the novel available for free at the internet archive.  

Bill Sweeney of Chicago is an Irish-American who loves serious music and fine literature.  He has a long successful career as a newspaper reporter behind him, but recently lost his job and is now a homeless drunk who sleeps in a park.  His pal and fellow bum Godfrey ("God" for short) tells him that a man can get anything he wants if he wants it badly enough, including money, including a woman.  Tonight Sweeney is taking a walk when he comes upon a crowd standing before the glass double doors of an apartment building.  Just inside the door lies a prone woman, a striking beauty, inert, guarded by a huge dog, a behemoth more like a wolf than the typical domestic doggie.  Everyone watches amazed as the woman comes to her feet with difficulty, revealing a bloody abdominal wound, and then the dog somehow pulls her dress off, revealing her naked body to the onlookers.  Then she collapses again.  The police incapacitate the dog and then tend to the gorgeous nude woman.  Sweeney returns to the park determined to "get" the injured woman, the most beautiful woman he has ever seen, expressing his desire as wanting to "spend the night with her."

No matter how ridiculous and perverse the idea of a dog trained to disrobe a woman might be, I thought this a good first chapter, and it piqued my interest, because it telegraphed that the plot was going to be driven by a man's single-minded dedication to a selfish goal, the kind of plot I like.

Galvanized by his desire for that woman, Sweeney sobers up and gets his job back.  He quickly finds out the name of the woman--Yolanda Lang--and taking advantage of his position as a journalist gets to work building up a relationship with her and hunting down her attacker, the homicidal maniac the press have dubbed "the Ripper" and credited with slaying three women before his dog-foiled attack on Lang.  

The Screaming Mimi has nineteen chapters, and Sweeney spends 17 or 18 of them doing the stuff guys always do in detective stories--travelling here and there throughout the town--and beyond--looking at documents and talking to people--generally over drinks--in his quest for clues.  He goes to bars, he calls in favors, he goes to a nightclub, he blackmails a creep, he rides a train, he commits a burglary, he suffers a burglary, he gets beat up.  Brown writes in a chatty jocular style, as if he and you are hanging out together and he is telling you a story.  There are lots of little ironic, sarcastic, cynical jokes:
A streetcar went by on Clark Street and it didn't sound any louder than an earthquake or the crack of doom.  Not much louder, anyway. 

He crossed Wacker Drive, hoping that a car would hit him, but none did.... 

Brown doesn't go out of his way to paint images or inspire an emotional reaction in the reader; the text is very plot-focused, but there is a brisk pace and a strong sense of tension that is leavened but not undermined by the pervasive bitter jokes and the many references to classical music, the fine arts, and literature.  The many little elements that make up the plot--the large roster of characters and all the individual clues--are like the tesserae of a mosaic; each has a strong individual personality conveyed efficiently in short clear strokes, each of individual interest, so you don't feel like you are inundated with trivial details, but instead enjoy each little piece of the jigsaw puzzle as it turns up, whether or not you know yet where it fits.    

Lang ("Yo" to her friends) is a dancer who performs at nightclubs with her monstrous canine, Devil; their act is called "The Famous Beauty and the Beast Dance" and climaxes with the dog removing her dress.  Yo's booking agent, Doc Greene, a retired head shrinker who is in love with the sexalicious Yo, immediately realizes that Sweeney is a rival, and the two men instinctively hate each other with a passion and each half-suspects the other of being the Ripper.  Greene does, however, help Sweeney in his pursuit of the Ripper, saying that he doesn't want the murderer to get another chance at Yo, and has hopes that Sweeney will be the serial killer's next victim.    

The identity of the Ripper, and how Sweeney discovers the truth, are broadly similar to what we see in Argento's film.  Sweeney uses a connection in the police department to secure an opportunity to talk to an imprisoned convict who was associated with the first of the Ripper's victims, and this guy directs our hero to the small shop where she briefly worked where he talks to the owner, a promiscuous homosexual.  (As in Brown's Rogue in Space, gay men are regarded as disgusting in The Screaming Mimi, with the characters employing terms like "faggot" and "fairy" in reference to them; when drunk and in need of money in Chapter 1, Sweeney even considers mugging a gay man he sees.)  Sweeney learns that the Ripper's first victim was murdered just after, in the "queer's" absence, selling to an unknown customer a nude statuette in black material of a terrified woman, a bit of merch colloquially known in the trade as a "Screaming Mimi."  (In The Bird with the Crystal Plumage the significant art object is a painting.)  Sweeney tracks down to his rural shack the starving artist who sculpted the prototype of this mass-produced figure in clay; this guy based the statue on his sister, whom he saw being assaulted by an escaped mental patient.  The sculptor saved his sister by killing the maniac, but sis ended up in the nut house herself--he was told she died there.  

Back in Chicago, Sweeney takes the steps that reveal to him the astonishing truth and put his and others' lives in desperate danger.  "Yolanda Lang" is a pseudonym--Yo is that artist's sister, who went insane when she saw the statue memorializing the worst moment of her life and became the murderous Ripper!  Doc Greene, whom we have been conditioned to think is blackly evil and probably the Ripper himself, sacrifices his reputation and his life trying to protect Yo from herself and the cops.  Sweeney barely survives, in the penultimate scene using his erudition to basically hypnotize the naked and insane knife-wielding Yo, turning her into a sort of statue so she won't slash him or sic her monstrous dog on him.  The three figures, man, woman and beast, spend an entire night in a stalemate, fulfilling in ironic fashion Sweeney's euphemistic ambition to "spend the night" with the most beautiful woman he has ever seen.

Even if a dog undressing a girl and a man paralyzing a woman for hours by reciting snatches of poetry at her are a little unbelievable (the latter scene is like an illustration of an idea I've seen bandied about on right-wing twitter, that women don't react to the words men say so much as respond to the tone in which the man says them, you know, like a dog), The Screaming Mimi is convincing as a whole because all of Brown's moving parts fit together and operate smoothly, and payoffs for all the foreshadowing and the little twists (like the radical shift in how we feel about Doc Greene) are all satisfying.  Obviously, by today's standards, The Screaming Mimi is sexist and homophobic and maybe even racist (all the talk of Irish people being like this or that) but it is a well-crafted and entertaining detective story and I can especially recommend it to fans of The Bird with the Crystal Plumage because it is fun to see what Argento took from the novel and what he left out or added.

So, another thumbs up for Fredric Brown.  Maybe we'll read another novel by him soon.

Wednesday, February 7, 2024

Merril-approved 1956 stories by J McConnell, J T McIntosh & I Melchior

One of our long term projects here at MPorcius Fiction Log is the tour we are taking of 1956 speculative fiction under the guidance of famous and influential critic Judith Merril, who had an expansive view of what constituted SF.  In the back of her anthology SF: The Year's Greatest Science-Fiction and Fantasy: Second Annual Volume is a long alphabetical list of stories she considered for inclusion in the volume but which didn't quite make the cut, and we have been going through the list, reading selected stories.  Currently we are on the "M"s, and today will look at three stories by authors I am considering minor, including one guy I think is a pretty bad writer, but about whom I retain some curiosity.

But first--links to earlier stops on our Merril-guided tour of 1956.

Abernathy and Aldiss
Anderson, Allen and Banks
Barrow, Beaumont and Blish
Bradbury, Bretnor, Budrys and Butler  
Carter, Clarke and Clifton 
Clingerman, Cogswell and Cohen
de Camp, deFord, Dickson and Doyle 

"Avoidance Situation" by James McConnell

McConnell has nine short fiction citations at isfdb, and is probably more important as a scientist than a SF writer--a biologist and animal psychologist, he was largely responsible for the later-exploded theory that planarian worms can learn information by gaining the memories of other planarians they eat.  McConnell was also injured by terrorist Ted Kaczynski, the infamous Unabomber.  McConnell was a guy who could think outside the box and was something of a comedian, attributes that suit him for a little side career as a SF writer.

"Avoidance Situation" was a cover story for If, promoted as "A New Space Thriller."  This issue of If includes a column by Forrest J. Ackerman, the lion's share of which is a report from a convention in Cleveland; students of the role of women in SF fandom should check out this column, as Ackerman talks at some length about how exciting it was to have some good-looking girls at the convention, seeing as how in his youth SF fans were few to none, and he names names of the 1956 SF hotties.  Ackerman also offers a solipsistic look at the origins of the abbreviation "stf" for "scientifiction," and a little piece of trivia: that Frankenstein by Mary Shelly is banned in South Africa.

Now, to "Avoidance Station."  A century ago mankind first travelled into space, and today huge starships that can "jump" in and out of "subspace" are exploring the universe.  The human race has searched many star systems, but not yet encountered intelligent aliens.  The first scenes of McConnell's tale see the captain of the Sunward, Hawkins, and the ship's psychologist, Broussard, in the ship's observatory, looking out at the stark empty blackness that is subspace as the vessel nears the end of a jump, discussing the psychological effect a universe empty of matter has on spacemen.

After the jump, Sunward travels for a few weeks to orbit and then land upon an Earth-like planet.  During a rest and relaxation period, Broussard explains to Hawkins some aspects of Kurt Lewin's theory of vector or field psychology ("Avoidance Situation" is a classic-style science fiction story, complete with science lectures) which I guess describes human decision-making and personality as a sum of the influence of varying environmental forces, using physics as a sort of metaphor.  (I never heard of Lwin before, so, for me, this story truly was educational.)  The topic Broussard focuses on is how when faced with two equally unappetizing courses, people will seek a third (try to "leave the field.")  Broussard also talks about his wish to meet aliens and put his psychology expertise to use dealing with them.  

The scene shifts to a one-man scout ship, piloted by an alien, Lan Sur, agent of the Dakn Empire.  After a session in the simulator in which he fights a practice battle and then has his performance judged by a computer, the computer alerts him to the presence of aliens on a nearby planet--Lan Sur has stumbled upon the Sunward.  The Dakn Empire is thousands of years old and comprises thousands of planets and many races, and Lan Sur opens negotiations with Hawkins and Broussard by telling them that his analysis indicates that Earth people are far less intelligent and less technologically advanced than any of the components of the Dakn Empire and so the people of Earth will be relegated to the slave caste.  Slaves, of course, have their memories and personalities erased before being dispersed throughout the vast Dakn Empire.  The weapons of the Sunward prove useless against even Lan Sur's personal force field, and Hawkins is given 24 hours to surrender; if he doesn't surrender Lan Sur will destroy the Sunward and direct the Dakn space navy to exterminate the human race.

Hawkins, as we expect in these old SF stories, uses his knowledge of science and a bit of trickery to escape the equally dreadful alternatives of genocide and mindless slavery--to, as was foreshadowed, "leave the field."  The sense of wonder ending of "Avoidance Situation" is that the human race will hide in subspace and bring with them the star systems which they currently occupy--it seems the Dakns don't know about subspace, instead relying on a drive that propels their ships within this universe at the speed of light squared.

This is a decent story that I enjoyed; mildly better than acceptable.

Like Merril, Isaac Asimov, Martin H. Greenberg and Charles G. Waugh approved of "Avoidance Situation" and they included it in their 1983 anthology Starships. 

"Empath" by J. T. McIntosh 

McIntosh is a prolific writer with a long record at isfdb, but usually when I read his work I am not happy with it: at these links witness my attacks on the novels The Million Cities and Norman Conquest 2066 and on the short stories "One into Two" and "At the Top of the World."  So as I prepare to read it, I am questioning Merril's wisdom in promoting "Empath."  It kind of looks like Merril may not be on the same page as the larger SF community on the topic of McIntosh, as, according to isfdb, after its appearance in New Worlds over on Terf Island, "Empath" was never reprinted.  Seeing that "Empath" is almost forty pages long, I am sort of wondering what the hell I am doing as I start it. 

We get a little eroticized violence to start our story.  Betty Lincoln is on the roof of the skyscraper from which Robert Green has just been pushed to his death by two brutish murderers.  The murderers are gone, and Betty, sure to be considered the prime suspect by the police, rips her clothes and cuts herself to add credibility to the claim she will make to the cops that she was defending herself from a rape attempt by Green and he fell to his death during the struggle.  But when the cops catch her up on the roof they don't believe her lies because Robert Green was a psychic ("empath") and was transmitting a mental distress call to another psychic working with the police, his brother Tim, in their battle against the criminal gang the Circle, which has its own psychic members.

Tim, knowing she is innocent, has Betty released, and we get some exposition about the character of her world.  It is a future of poverty, in which the small number of rich people (the "moles") live underground for fear of nuclear bombs. while the poor masses (the "angels") live aboveground in dirty cities.  Worldwide poverty is apparently the result of misguided Western efforts to alleviate Third World poverty--people in London and New York are now as poor as those in Bombay and Peking--doh!  

Betty is attacked by one of the thugs who murdered Green and tried to frame her for the murder, but she outwits him and captures him.  To protect her, the police then put Betty up in a mole hotel, a much nicer place than any Betty, an angel, has ever seen.  Betty realizes that she is in love with Tim, and can sense where Tim is--her own psychic powers have awakened!  She joins Tim, who explains that the Circle is led by selfish empaths who are trying to take over the world; he and his brother were the leaders of the  empaths who are siding with the established order against the Circle revolutionaries.

The last dozen or so pages of the story see Betty become the world's most powerful empath and she and Tim use their powers to guide the police to the empaths of the Circle, who are destroyed.

"Empath"'s van Vogt-style plot isn't terrible, but the story is poorly written and some elements seem extraneous while others are underdeveloped--it feels like a rush job rather than something carefully crafted.  The sexualized elements make "Empath" feel like a half-assed exploitation story, while one of the central conceits of McIntosh's tale--that to use your psychic powers you have to let go and just allow feelings to wash over you, rather than consciously focus and direct your powers--sort of drains the characters of agency.  On the other hand, I sort of like McIntosh's cynicism--even the "good" empaths, Tim and Betty, are arrogant jerks who look down on the mundanes (I guess we'd call them "muggles" nowadays) and the cop who saves Betty in the final fight is able to do so because he is cold and ruthless, the sort of person who never has any friends and is not swayed by emotion but concentrates on getting the job done.

I'm not sure whether to condemn this story as poor or judge it as just barely acceptable filler--in a spirit of generosity let's give it a passing grade.  This time McIntosh makes it past the post by a nose; this may be McIntosh's best work.

"The Racer" by Ib Melchior 

Melchior has two novels and three stories listed at isfdb.  According to wikipedia, the Danish-born Melchior had an exciting life of struggle against the Nazis and the Communists, working in Hollywood and as a writer of mainstream fiction and nonfiction.  "The Racer" first appeared in the men's magazine Escapade and would be adapted for the screen as Death Race 2000; it has been reprinted repeatedly in anthologies like Charles Nuetzel's If This Goes On  and Peter Haining's Death on Wheels.  I can't find a copy of the appropriate issue of Escapade online, so I'm reading "The Racer" in Jim Wynorski's They Came from Outer Space, an anthology of short stories that served as the basis for films.

As you probably already know, "The Racer" is a satire of the blood lust of the entertainment-loving public.  (This is where I link to The Kinks' "Give the People What They Want" and 10,000 Maniacs' "Candy Everybody Wants.")   Willie is a top driver in the world of cross country races in which drivers are not only judged on their times to the finish line, but on how many pedestrians they kill or injure.  We follow him and his mechanic Hank as they start the New York to Los Angeles race, and Willie begins having second thoughts about the propriety of murdering innocent women and children, much to the chagrin of Hank, who has a hankering for the big bonus they will get for running over a record number of pedestrians.

A simple story, but told with economy in a brisk straightforward manner--not bad.

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It is easy to see why Merril gave the nod to McConnell's competently told psychology-centric classic-SF-style story and to Melchior's effective and economical satire of the debased public.  As for McIntosh's borderline mediocrity...well, maybe she liked its cynicism and ambiguity, its portrayal of a world in which people's fates are determined by factors beyond their control, success is corelated with not caring and people with resources have contempt for their inferiors.

Another fun and thought-provoking leg of our long march through 1956.  Keep your eyes open for the next installment of this journey through the year of Khrushchev's secret speech denouncing Stalin, the Montgomery bus boycott and the rise of Elvis Presley.

Tuesday, February 6, 2024

Nightmares from Thomas Ligotti, Robert Aickman and Charles L. Grant

The nightmare continues!  Here at MPorcius Fiction Log we have been reading stories from To Sleep, Perchance to Dream... Nightmare, a 1993 anthology edited by Stefan R. Dziemianowicz, Robert Weinberg and Martin H. Greenberg.  To Sleep, Perchance to Dream... Nightmare contains thirty stories, and we have read 14 of them over the years in various venues; interested parties can see what we thought about them by clicking the links below:  

"The Black Stone" by Robert E. Howard     
"Ubbo-Sathla" by Clark Ashton Smith
"Scarlet Dream" by C. L. Moore
"The Dreams in the Witch-House" by H. P. Lovecraft 
"The Isle of the Sleeper" by Edmond Hamilton
"The Unspeakable Betrothal" by Robert Bloch  
"Perchance to Dream" by Charles Beaumont
"A Dread of Red Hands" by Bram Stoker
"The Lady in Gray" by Donald Wandrei
"Prescience" by Nelson S. Bond
"The Dreams of Albert Moreland" by Fritz Leiber
"Lover When You're Near Me" by Richard Matheson
"The Depths" by Ramsey Campbell

Today we'll read three more stories from the collection, those tales plucked by Messrs. D, W and G from the oeuvres of Thomas Ligotti, Robert Aickman and Charles L. Grant.

"Dream of a Mannikin" by Thomas Ligotti (1983?)

This story has appeared in several books, sometimes as "Dream of a Manikin" and sometimes as "Dream of a Mannikin" and sometimes as "Dream of a Mannikin, or The Third Person."  There is some confusion at isfdb over whether the story debuted in 1982 or 1983, but it looks to me like its first appearance was in the 1983 issue of the magazine Eldritch Tales.  In 1989 Jessica Amanda Salmonson included the story in her anthology Tales by Moonlight II, which appears to be a collection of stories that first appeared in small press magazines; "Dream of a Manikin" was reprinted in the Ligotti collections Songs of a Dead Dreamer and Nightmare Factory.

I guess we sort of expect Ligotti stories to be a little challenging, to be the sort of story you have to figure out, and this is true of "Dream of a Mannikin," but it is not terribly difficult.  The story takes the form of a long letter written by a psychiatrist to a fellow shrink, a woman with whom he is in love, and we learn more and more about his feelings for her and the nature of their relationship as the story progresses.  The last paragraph of the letter is in italics and is apparently the female therapist's notes on or response to the man's letter.

The main topic of the letter is the visit of a young woman, Amy Locher, to the letter writer.  Locher has had a terrible dream and is seeking treatment, and it turns out she was directed to the narrator by the woman he is in love with.  Ligotti puts multiple layers between the story and the reader as he has the letter writer describe Locher's dream, which mostly consists of a second, inner dream, the dream of the patient's dream version of herself.  In real life (ostensibly) Locher is a clerk or secretary at an industrial firm, but in her dream she works in a clothing store and dresses the mannikins (the spelling is perhaps significant--I'd spell the term for those figures in a store "mannequin.")  The retail worker version of the patient has a dream herself in which she is attacked by the mannequins she dresses and turned into a mannequin herself--this dream within a dream includes classic dream elements, like being unable to move and unable to scream when in danger.

The woman shrink has some totally wacky theories about "otherworlds" and powerful beings who toy with lesser beings that may be subordinate "splinter" aspects of themselves, theories that the narrator feels are more metaphysical than scientific, and the male shrink in his letter accuses her of manipulating Locher, of hypnotically inducing her dream, in order to acquire evidence of her bizarre theories and to lay a trap for him.  And an elaborate trap it is--it seems the narrator's secretary is an agent of the woman shrink.

In the second part of the letter the narrator describes his investigations that lead him closer to the nature of the trap the woman psychiatrist has laid for him, which he nevertheless falls into.  It seems the female shrink has somehow gained the ability, through contact with other worlds or dimensions, to take control of people and turn them into mannikins (also described as dolls--allusively, the lady shrink apparently had a doll named Amy as a child, and the word "darling" is spelled "dolling" multiple times throughout the story in multiple contexts) and she has done this to Amy Lochner and it looks like the male shrink is in the process of becoming her next victim.  Or maybe the female psychiatrist can imbue dolls--and/or people--with alien souls she snares from outer space--one of the themes of the story is ambiguity and confusion about identity and transformation of identity.  Or perhaps the female shrink is a space monster and all the other characters--Locher, secretary and male psychiatrist--are aspects of her soul which she plays with to help pass the aeons.

This is a well-crafted story; the depiction of dreams feels totally believable, the images are strong, and every sentence feels significant, offering some clue to the plot or adding to the atmosphere.  "Dream of a Mannikin" does require some patience and it will give your noggin a workout, though, so maybe it's not what everybody is going to think of as fun entertainment.  


"Never Visit Venice" by Robert Aickman (1968)

Robert Aickman is another writer whose work I expect to strain the brain case.  The title of "Never Visit Venice" made me wonder if I was in for allusions to Thomas Mann's famous "Death In Venice," which I have read a few times, and to Proust--Venice (Marcel's desire to go there and his eventual visit) is a recurring theme in Remembrance of Lost Time, and strange dreams, in which little Marcel has become an inanimate object or an abstract concept, are a prominent topic of the very first page of that monumental novel.  And then came the epigraph that opens "Never Visit Venice," some lines from Celine, whose Death on the Installment Plan and Castle to Castle we read back in early 2022. 

Fern is an Englishman, an office worker who is shy, unambitious,  and not very social; he doesn't make as much money as he could because he doesn't see the point, and he doesn't make friends or achieve any success with women largely because other people interest him but little.  He has a recurring dream about embracing a woman in a gondola in Venice, and eventually actually goes to Venice, where the dream comes true in a macabre and surreal fashion.  As the story ends it seems that Fern, alone in the gondola with the skeleton of the woman who beckoned him into the little craft, will drift out to sea to be drowned; one of the last things he sees is a political slogan painted on a wall, I guess a quote or paraphrase from Mussolini, asserting it is better to live like a lion for an hour than to live a lifetime as an ass.    

Though the sudden revelation in the end, when the woman Fern has just had sex with becomes or is revealed to be a skeleton, is like something out of Weird Tales or EC comics, most of the story resembles literary fiction.  The first part is page after page of Fern in England that focus on his ambiguous and diffident attitude toward life and career and money, and most of the remainder is page after page of Fern in Venice, finding everything disappointing and sensing that Venice's glory days are long past, a fact none of the living people in Venice are to acknowledge--only the ghost woman in the gondola will voice this sad truth.  The pervasive atmosphere of the story is of ambiguity and irony--early in the story we learn Fern is both proud and embarrassed that he is different than other people and doesn't really get along with them, and we are told early in the Venice part of the story that Fern's expectations of what he would find in Venice, based on what he has read and been told, are not realized, that in fact he finds the opposite of what he was told to expect.  And there are many other instances of irony and ambiguity.  One of the more striking examples is the camouflaged suggestion on the last page that Mussolini, whom we always see portrayed as a monster or a buffoon, had a better idea about how to live than does the inoffensive Fern, a strange notion that I guess the quote from Celine, the notorious Jew-hater and Nazi-sympathizer, that begins the story foreshadows.  

But it could be that Aickman is not endorsing Mussolini and Celine.  Perhaps Aickman's point is that people who put themselves out there, who embrace life with vigor, are often evil people, and that being forward and ambitious is dangerous and ultimately pointless (Mussolini and Celine are, of course, in the final equation, losers who get humiliated.)  Consider that Fern tries to realize his dream of love in Venice only to have sex with a skeleton who tells him one should "Never visit Venice" (i.e., do not pursue your dreams) and then get killed, and that early in the story Aickman puts forward the idea that travel is pointless, suggesting, as would a skeptic of "globalism," that easy travel and communication have served to homogenize the world, turn a world of diverse cultures into one big monoculture, so that travel and communication are unprofitable, every place being now the same.         

Though not a lot actually happens in the story, Aickman's style, as in good literary fiction, is smooth and engaging and carries you along so the story doesn't feel long at all, even though there is little or no narrative drive.  Thought-provoking and worthwhile.

"Never Visit Venice" first appeared in the Aickman collection Sub Rosa, and was also included in the collection The Wine-Dark Sea.


"The Last and Dreadful Hour" by Charles L. Grant (1986)

"The Last and Dreadful Hour" is one of Grant's stories about the town of Oxrun, and debuted in the collection The Orchard.  The Orchard has appeared in numerous editions, and looking over their covers I was amused to see that in one edition the Stephen King blurb reads "One of the premier horror writers of his or any generation," but on another cover the quote has been misleadingly edited into "The premier horror writer of his or any generation."  Was King aware of this inexcusable chicanery?  

Ligotti's "Dream of a Mannikin" is like 12 pages long, and Aickman's "Never Visit Venice" is some ten pages longer.  Grant's "The Last and Dreadful Hour" is ten pages longer still, clocking in at 33 pages, a fact that made me groan after I had read the first of those thirty-three, which is wholly devoted to a description of the weather, complete with poetic repetition--while Ligotti and Aickman's stories felt like literary fiction, Grant's from square one felt like the work of a guy trying to be literary but succeeding only in wasting everybody's time.

The second page of "The Last and Dreadful Hour" is given over to describing in mind-numbing detail the movie theatre in Oxrun.  The aforementioned weather--a ferocious storm--causes a power outage, and the theatre manager goes on the sound system--which, unlike the electric lights, is somehow still working--to apologize.  We are then introduced to a passel of boring characters with boring backstories, and forced to read bland and verbose retailings of their every move--
...she straightened, rubbed a hand over the back of her neck, and waved him out to the aisle.  He grinned and did as he was told, thanked her as she joined him, took her arm and pulled her down a pace while Seth and Davidson moved to carry the old man...
--as they discover an unconscious man in the darkened theater.  It is bad enough that Grant wastes our time detailing these boring people's every gesture, but his sin is compounded by the fact that his descriptions don't even work.  Toni the medical student is holding Ellery the depressed bookstore clerk's hand, and then she lets go of his hand, but then two lines later she is "pull[ing] him slowly up the aisle," as if she never let go of his hand.  So not only are all these descriptions tedious and useless, they are confusing, and then angering when you realize you are looking back up the page to reread boring sentences in hopes of figuring out if some dope is holding another dope's hand, even though whether or not these dopes are holding hands is meaningless.  It is possible these apparent mistakes are intentional, an effort to make the story "dream-like," but I am betting Grant and his editor just screwed up.

Some supernatural force locks all the doors and renders all the windows indestructible so the characters are all stuck in the candle-lit (and believe me, we hear like one thousand times about wax dripping off these damned candles) cinema, in which all the women flirt with Ellery and the local rich guy acts like a jerk.  People start disappearing, and while Ellery and a woman (not Toni, who has disappeared) are away from the group looking for one of them, she strips naked and tries to seduce Ellery, and then turns into a medusa and then into a skeleton.  Ellery faints, wakes up, finds everybody is gone.  A third woman reappears and flirts with Ellery before joining him on another search.  Another woman reappears to flirt with Ellery, and they search some more.  (This story moves in sterile circles--phrases, images, and actions all get repeated while the plot goes absolutely nowhere.)  The same sort of stuff keeps happening until the story finally ends with the awakening of the old man and the hint that this mind-bogglingly lame story that makes no sense and achieves nothing is all just the dream of that old man whom they found unconscious--or maybe it is the dream of sad Ellery himself.  (Toni's out-of-left-field mention of the orchard way back at the start of the story that implies the orchard is a locus of black magic or demonic possession or something is forgotten--maybe "The Last and Dreadful Hour" is more like a chapter of an episodic novel than a short story that can really stand on its own.)

This story is very bad.  The plot stinks, with no resolution or development and lots of loose ends.  The style is horrible, a mixture of the pretentious and the just plain dumb.  The characters' actions and dialogue make little sense, are just a series of non sequiturs; characters in genre fiction often act stupidly so that the plot will work, but this story is even worse because it doesn't even have a plot in which anything happens.

Grant has won a pile of awards but this story is garbage and I don't know why Dziemianowicz, Weinberg and Greenberg put it in their anthology; maybe they had run out of dream stories?  I will now take Stephen King blurbs even less seriously, and shun stories by Grant assiduously.

Incomprehensibly, "The Last and Dreadful Hour" would be included in the "Best of" Grant collection Scream Quietly.


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So today we have three stories that remind you that pursuing women is hazardous, two quite literary stories that are well-written followed by a piece of junk that makes you question the wisdom and honesty of Stephen King and the entire horror fiction establishment.  What a ride!

It's been like six weird and horror blog posts in a row here at MPorcius Fiction Log; when next we meet we'll do something a little different.